Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Over the last 20 years, the way people care for their older family members have changed. Subsequently, many homes now send their ageing members for care in old people's facility rather than personally caring for them. Creating more time for personal life seems to be the primary benefit of this, however, it has resulted in a feeling of neglect and its consequent effects on elders.
Chief among the benefits of this growing trend is the area of personal obligations. This has led to more time for work and also managing immediate family and household. Consequently, this has resulted in reduced stress and improved family relationships. Furthermore, it is the case that many adults are engrossed with making money and barely have time to care for their elders. Children also are busy with school and so these seniors are left to watch TV all day. A care facility thus, promises a better quality life for them from activities ranging from meeting pals their age, forming new relationships to purposeful interactions and engaging in healthy activities together.
On the other hand, research has shown that more than 60% of all old people in care homes develop feelings of neglect and consequent depression that often leads to more severe health conditions. This was seen in a recent UK survey which showed that about 40% of elderly people in care homes end up demented. Because of this, concerns about the quality of care these seniors receive has arisen since care givers may not be sufficiently able to cater for the unique need of all persons present. One further drawback of a nursing home is in the area of cost as expenses involved tends to be prohibitive. Services cost money and many families are infact unable to meet demands for care.
In conclusion, these nursing services have provided many homes with family time and privacy, it has also spiced up the boring routine lives of our senior family members. However, many old people are content in staying at home with their family and they feel abandoned by their loved ones when left to the care of a facility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8591954023 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45072155379 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4714436475 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.916666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268284656884 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104814143335 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593638463629 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181669657233 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256388205311 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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