You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mali,
I hope this finds you well. I'm writing with regard to the noise from my flat in the last couple of days which you complained of in your letter. I'm sincerely sorry for the inconveniences it has caused you and your entire household.
The noise was as a result of my son- Emmanuel's tenth birthday celebration and the fact that he insisted we organise a low key party with a few friends since it would be his first birthday celebration in 10 years. Also, the D.J out of excitement and the joyous mood, slammed at a very high volume, since we were all in the mood of celebration, we were carried away.
I sincerely apologise for playing and making such a loud sound and for the disturbances or inconveniences this act has caused you and your household, kindly understand and bear with me.
Consequently, I will arrange to employ experts to find a modality to make the walls sound proof and forestall future occurrences of this nature. Once again I am sorry for the way things turned out.
I will keep you posted.
Yours sincerely,
Francis Ojima Akoji.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ar Mali, I hope this finds you well. Im writing with regard to the noise from m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...which you complained of in your letter. Im sincerely sorry for the inconveniences ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: J
...ay celebration in 10 years. Also, the D.J out of excitement and the joyous mood, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, so, well, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73157894737 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68834047606 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647368421053 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0879544763 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250878534214 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102027136728 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943304503026 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126205478388 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122126894446 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.