You live in a block of flats, your neighbor makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord.
In your letter, you should:
• explain the situation
• tell him/her how you are affected by this
• suggest what you want the landlord to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I have a noise complaint against my neighbour who is very noisy and has influenced issues for me.
Firstly, I would like to describe what happen. They make a loud all the time even though it is over the midnight. The other day, when I tried to fall asleep, their noise sound woke me up and made me staying all night because I could not sleep properly because they played music so loud.
I need to tell you that how this problem has caused me badly. As I mentioned, I cannot fall asleep very comfortably and also it affects my lifestyle a lot because I do not focus on my study appropriately. This issue becomes a part of mental stress in my life.
I recommend you to give some solutions to erase this issue. I would like you to notice them to be quiet because they might allow if you warn them. I also need to fill up an incident report to submit because it is effective way to complain my claims. I need a peaceful lifestyle, so I need your help to resolve this problem.
Your sincerely,
Dfasdf
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ause they might allow if you warn them. I also need to fill up an incident report...
^
Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is effective way to complain my claims. I need a peaceful lifestyle, so I need yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31527093596 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37941743173 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645320197044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1166245031 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252815427146 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940653985153 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086670390056 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143764891043 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701017962041 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.