You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good.
You want to tell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer. In your letter
say how you feel about his performance
give details of your musical activities
explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Joshua,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I participated a music concert currently and was thinking that your voice was very nice.
Firstly, I need to describe how I feel in terms of your singing. Your voice is fantastic and the songs you sang are totally become my favourite genre of music because I am so pleasured your performance. I am willing to take part in your concert again if there is more.
To be honest, I would like to provide the specific musical information that I take. Recently, I attend a class which teaches how to play musical instrument in my society. I mostly learn to play piano with my tutor because I aim to perform a concert next month.
In this sense, I request you to come over my class to help me to improve my instrumental skills. I sometimes struggle playing my equipment because some music notes are very difficult to play. However, if you help me to erase this problem, my social activities may be better. I really appreciate if you allow my request.
Your sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Joshua, I am writing this letter to let you know...
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Line 10, column 119, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to play'.
Suggestion: to play
...strumental skills. I sometimes struggle playing my equipment because some music notes a...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61827956989 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6237936241 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7330204202 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5833333333 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291961543778 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105207773028 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064125017705 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181950711475 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745932606121 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.