When people commit serious crime in most countries, they are sent to prison.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this approach?
It is undeniably true that lawbreakers should be punished with either imprisonment or in any other form of punishment. While few experts believe that the jail system would be beneficial for the society by locking up culprits, other would oppose this theory by pointing out a few demerits from prisons.
To embark upon, there are a plethora of advantages from lock-up. Nowadays, the crime rate has been a major concern throughout the world and by sending behind the bars for the breaches, not only number of offenses but also idea of doing crime would be reduced. As a result of this, it protects the dwellers from both violent and serious misdeeds and they can lead life more joyfully. In addition to it, it would give a chance to offenders to realize their violations and it might also assist them not to break the law yet again. Thus, after convicts are paroled they will find new ways to live instead of committing a felony.
Shifting toward the second school of thought, there are a couple of disadvantages from the same system. First and foremost, maintaining a sophisticated environment would be expensive to deal and this money will only come from either taxpayer’s pocket or from government funds, therefore, in some way, these are detrimental to any country's economy. Secondly, getting employment for prisoners who are released from prison would be a daunting task for them.
To conclude although there are few merits such as fewer crimes, punishing for the illegality, few drawbacks are also attached to it for instance expensive. Therefore, whether imposing a cell period or not is always been a debatable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ing a cell period or not is always been a debatable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99632352941 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71987023514 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636029411765 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5125809411 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115425389864 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399747222312 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346249655009 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586194627619 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520767663241 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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