In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be a case? Do you think this is a positive or negative solution?
Buying a property is one of the biggest steps in people’s lives. Even though some might view it unnecessary and more likely to rent houses annually, the rest try their best to afford buying a flat. There are many reasons behind these varied desires, namely stability in life and not having to be accountable to the owners. As far as I am concerned, the importance of buying a house is by no means comparable with renting it.
The chief reasons to buy a property can be manifold. To embark with, many people need stability in their lives, meaning they do not want to relocate every year or be always concerned with an increase in the rental fee. The older generation, having been retired or working in the public sector, are more inclined to be reluctant to re-house, due to their higher tendency to be stable. On the other hand, for some people renting a place for living is a waste of money although it would be a good chance for individuals with business acumen to invest the money on more lucrative businesses like stock market. Accordingly, the former group would rather spend their money on buying a home for not only themselves, but the future of their offspring. For instance, during the lockdown, many renters had problems with their expenditure, particularly the rental fee they had to pay monthly, while house owners were not confronted with this hurdle.
There are a variety of attitudes towards buying or renting a house. Some might believe that buying a house brings about extreme dullness in their lives. They also do not see buying a place as profitable as running a business with the same amount of layout. However, I believe these ideas are flawed. If a family buys a house, they will be given a golden opportunity to renovate or design their homes the way it would meet their needs to the fullest, which is impossible in rental places, leading to a variety. Moreover, owning a flat is a good investment for individuals who are quite risk-averse, especially in countries with high rate of inflation like Iran and Venezuela.
In conclusion, although some are keen on renting a house, others want to buy a place for being stable and having a future investment. This is, I believe, a positive approach in life due to the merits that go hand in hand it owning a house, namely being allowed to make aesthetic changes and having a low-risk investment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
...ally, the rest try their best to afford buying a flat. There are many reasons behind t...
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Line 6, column 676, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of inflation like Iran and Venezuela. In conclusion, although some are keen on...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anges and having a low-risk investment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74396135266 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61177578048 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531400966184 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.21189879 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.111111111 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203994658987 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624288630084 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314276698838 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128673546341 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233790153731 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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