Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a
healthy diet. Do agree or disagree?
Many people in the world currently choose not to eat meat in their daily meals. While I
accept that this tendency can help people to live healthily, I believe not everyone should
become vegetarian.
In my opinion, there are several benefits of being vegetarian. Firstly, since there are
many types of vegetables that can provide people with enough nutrition, it has become
less necessary for people to eat meat. For example, potatoes and beans are two popular
dishes for families in England because of the large amount of calories they can provide.
Secondly, vegetables and fruits contain vitamins that are highly beneficial for people.
For instance, it has been proven that eating an apple every day can help individuals
improve their health and avoid illness. Finally, if more people refuse to eat meat, fewer
animals will be slaughtered.
However, I believe this tendency is not suitable for everyone. First, it is not advisable for
children to become vegetarian. As they are in the process of growing up, they need to
eat a wide range of food, including meat which contains essential nutrients, to improve
their physical health. If children only eat vegetables, they might become less healthy
than they should be. Furthermore, athletes are the people who should not be
vegetarian. Since their job involves intense training on a regular basis, they need to
consume meat such as beef or pork which provides them with enough calories.
In conclusion, while I agree that becoming vegetarian can help people have a healthy
diet, I do not think it is an option that everybody should take.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17424242424 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5495097568 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3549937164 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338549607873 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103141892739 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859896789208 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877280882591 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709566828394 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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