Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individual and Society.
To what extent do you agree?
In this modern era, people easily know about what is happening in the world due to,some advance gizmos and applications . Many people reckon that social networking sites such as Facebook have had negative effect upon individual and Society . I partially agree with the given statement .
On one hand, technology has been booming by leaps and bounds ,owing to that, there are plethora of social networking sites and application in the world. Social networking sites make people life easily compared to the past . People can know about what is going in the world: actors life; know about politics ;marketing; product launching and some useful sites related to the fitness. The epitome of this, Government of India has launched one application related to covid-19 the name of this application is (aarogya Setu app) free from illness - this application shows how to keep ourselves from covid-19 pandemic. After launch this app people are used to this application and they keep their selves from corona virus .
On the other hand, main individual perceive that social networking sites have had a Mammoth negative impact upon both. First and foremost, youngster are used to this application which is related to crime and they are more focus upon crime sites rather than their curriculum, due to that, optimum chances youngster become culprit is bad effect on society as well as individuals. For an example,couple of years ago , in Canada one hacker not only the personal information of well -non person but also their account hacked and stolen money, on account of that, the person who hacked information. the hackers got capital punishment by Canada government .
In conclusion, there are many networking sites which are helpful for people to get jobs; studying and set their future goals, however, illegal sites crime related it's not benignant both also bad impact on children .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19471947195 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58446243697 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0354934148 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277140795297 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119300528029 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148061476459 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194890499916 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104924792297 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.