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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the increasing popularity of social media, there exists a growing concern for the negative effects of this invention on individual people as well as community. While this is true to some extent, I believe that social networking sites also have good aspects to consider.
On the one hand, it is understandable why this notion receives a significant amount of support. Because of the amount of time people spend scrolling down Facebook and Instagram, they run the risk of suffering from some physical and mental illnesses. This situation manifests itself starkly in the fact that there is a considerably high proportion of young people developing short-sightedness and mental problems when constantly exposed to social media. Also, a resulted sedentary lifestyle may lead to such long-term ailments as diabetes and obesity. In addition, people, especially the youth, tend to indulge themselves in the virtual world and become less involved in face-to-face conversation, which means that they no longer care about anything around them, thus contributing to the crime rates in the community. For the abovementioned reasons, people are becoming extremely worried about the overuse of social media.
However, there are also some benefits that social networking brings to human beings. First, it can be a great place for people to meet new friends and keep in touch with people more easily. In other words, with an access to the Internet, people these days can contact their acquaintances through chat boxes whenever and wherever they are. Another great thing about social media is the use of it to promote tourism, which encourages closer international relationships and integration. This can clearly be seen in a variety of photos and videos posted on Facebook recently that have contributed to the development of the tourism industry in Viet Nam. Therefore, the ubiquity of social media has to some extent brought positive changes to individuals and community.
In conclusion, although some rationales behind the idea that social media has affected people and society negatively, I believe that it has also done wonders to the development of human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...eople more easily. In other words, with an access to the Internet, people these days can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33918128655 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90270036978 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2145206343 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.733333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15812371956 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558655232114 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437847144278 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111017416867 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458728028798 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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