Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's society, parents' participation in their children's upbringing and education is having a profound impact on their efficiency. Most people have different views on this but in my opinion, it is better for children to be monitored by their parents so as to reduce potential risks in their education and lend them a hand to achieve their goals easier. I feel this way for some rationale, which I elaborate upon hereunder.
To begin with, due to the status quo, parents should notice for the risks that might their children faced to them while they are educating. That is means, children are unable to detect the problems that happened around them might get them into trouble, especially once they are attending schools or universities. For example, when I was younger, I used to do all my works on myself and after I grow up, I had to make a decision on choosing the field of study. I was insisted on studying nursery while my parents compelled me to study English Translation. After a while, I could be a great person and attain scholarships at the university, and based on that experience, I think that If I had chosen a nursery, I would not have been successful.
Second, from an educational viewpoint, as opposed to the past, parents should involve themselves in children's education and instill confidence in them in order to be successful. Children should aware of their parents' passion to get flying colors and being motivated by them as a positive role model in their life. For example, when children have learned valuable life skills, they find out there would not be anything overrides the importance of education for their future careers. Research findings confirm that when parents undertake this great responsibility, in turn, they have to up-to-date their knowledge in the long run, and apart from the education issues, they could make a closer relationship with their children.
All in all, by taking all the points into account, I vehemently assure that it might be highly beneficial if parents involved with children's education. Not only do the parents help them to demonstrate their correct way and help them to achieve their goals, but also they will be more closer and not be confided their relation only to education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ildren to be monitored by their parents so as to reduce potential risks in their educati...
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Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...ieve their goals, but also they will be more closer and not be confided their relation only...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, while, apart from, as to, for example, i feel, i think, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90789473684 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74081063488 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523684210526 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2177473835 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.214285714 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243966790263 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967470954458 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646690981465 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16319713094 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039952069618 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.