You and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment.
In your letter:
- give details of the things that were unsatisfactory
- explain the reactions of the members of your family
- ask the manager what he/she is going to do about the situation
Dear Sir,
I with my family was at your resort last week, staying in an apartment number 403, which has a beautiful sea view along with fabulous sunset which was mesmerising for us. But the lawn next to the resort had a marriage function for two consecutive days. The loud music throughout the evening and chaos created by the visitors was quite disturbing.
We have actually planned for a three days peaceful vacation away from the city with the expectation of spending quality time with the family. On the contrary, it was not as expected, as we were forced to close the windows because of deafening, instead of enjoying the view and living the moments. The guests from the marriage were disturbing late at night as well, and it was difficult for my father and mother to grab a pleasing sleep. Even the room service was affected due to staff incompatibility.
You resort is one my favourite destination for vacation, but next time we request let the customer know prior if in case such functions are organised so that required action can be taken.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...action can be taken. Yours faithfully, Shreyas Parab
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, well, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79255319149 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62377501651 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696808510638 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6815280349 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148983672314 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052359831164 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515517024482 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836579645376 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486311318868 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.