You and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory.
Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment. In your letter,
* give details of the things that were unsatisfactory
* explain the reactions of the members of your family
* ask the manager what he / she is going to do about the situation
Dear Sir,
I have been your recent customer booked for 3 days family holiday to Las Vegas. I am writing to you concerning certain things which should come to your notice before you lose any other customer. The apartment we lived in had number of problems which if I had known known earlier, would have never said yes to your company.
Starting with exceptionally good sea view from the large window in the apartment which we later noticed had its hinge broken. Consequently, we had to suffer the cold breeze and were not able to sleep specially, the children. We were also expecting the water to be lukewarm or warm for our family to shower but unfortunately, we had to bear the cold water and not able to take the bath fully. The noticeable things such as no internet, kitchen appliances and television access which had given us the hard time.
Moreover, my family members were all excited for the trip which later became a nightmare for all of us. We tried our best possible efforts to complain about the apartment in the city, but no prompt action was taken. I have paid you 1000$ for this beautifully expected vacation but indeed it was completely not worth visiting. Also, for this unsatisfied memory, I would expect you to compensate the portion of my spending or fully if possible, for the peace of my mind. I will be waiting for your speedy response.
Yours Sincerely,
TT
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...e lived in had number of problems which if I had known known earlier, would have n...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: known
...n had number of problems which if I had known known earlier, would have never said yes to y...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...rompt action was taken. I have paid you 1000$ for this beautifully expected vacation ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68979591837 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52330742938 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7336486991 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3846153846 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209619810495 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757226353884 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052852311966 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145623389324 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076424214723 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.