The following infographic outlines current parenthood trends for all Australian births. Australian births to mothers under the age of 25 and Australian family composition. Write a brief report of at least 150 words describing the information depicted here.
A glance at the infographic provided reveals parenthood trends for all Australian births and the fertility of Australian mothers under the age of 25. The infographic also shows what types of families children aged under 15 are living in.
It is evident from the given information that 83 percent of children live in a family with both Parents. Only 2 percent Of children lived in a lone father family while the moderate rate of children in sole mother family was seven times higher than lone father’s family, at 15 percent.
In stark contrast,however,the most common in the rate of fertility of Australian mothers under 25 who were not married saw at 72 percent in given births while among all births was twice less than mothers under the age of 25,at 34 percent. The second most common in the popularity of all births who are married joints saw at 66 percent of given babies whereas mums who are married under 25 years saw a quite lower percentage of 28 percent of fertility.
It is interesting to note that the average age of mothers in Australia who had given birth was 30.7.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74736842105 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69479851903 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.532895895 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.857142857 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31368728243 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170599953344 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156778713142 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205851563184 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144249923781 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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