Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, in this intertwined world, communication is one the most integral need of humans. As the roads have worked as the main way of communication to transfer anythings, now, the Internet are supperior than raods to deliver what people need int thier daily life. I personaly believe that providing the Internet for people woth low or no cost is a fascinating idea which help not only people but also governments for many reasons, which I will elaborate on two of them in the following essay.
To begin with, internet is vessels of human's body for societies. Government should provide the easy and free access to the Internet for public to stimulate the societies to work more efficiently. With the widespread of the Internet many of tasks are done faster and cheaper in this context. A massive amount of daily tasks, in the personal and governmental level, are fasilliated through the Internet, which it could not be imagiened without access to the Internet. The more usage of the Internet, the more save of energy, time and money for folks and governments. For example, my wife and I decreased our trip for shoping in month by 90 persent just by online shoping. Since we adopted this hapit we could decrease the gas usage of our car more than 50 percent per month. It means that we decrease our carbon-footprint and help our environment. If more people attemppt to decrease their usage of cars, not only we will have the better environment but also the government do not need to invest a lot of money to maintaine the roads or construct the new ones.
Secondly, by using the Internet, companies will benefit more then they can pay more taxes and help authorities to provide free Internet to public. When companies are using remote working strategies they will save enormous amount of money not only on facilities but also in the cost of runnig thier campus. To put this in prespective, in this COVID-19 pandemic era my father and my brother stayed home and woked all their official job. The companies are running better for secvral reasons, they don't need pay for power and cleaning the office, furhtermore they could save on the power. My father said that his companie's earning surged about twenty percent in the last quarter because using the remote-working practice. Finally, the government will benefit from this revenue by traxing those companies. This revenue should be invested to give public free access, albait, personal usage of the free Internet needs a restrict regualtion about the maximum volume of usage or the speed of that which could be enact by the authotities.
In sum, I firmly believe that government should provides free access to the Internet for public. This is because both people and govenment benefit through declining the car usage help our environment and decrease the cost of environment porblems and because govenment earn more tax money from those companies which benefits more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2429.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92697768763 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65471447401 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476673427992 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 760.5 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7754176956 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4761904762 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185465604752 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646289631099 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596980577322 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120663805694 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239804347342 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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