Finland telephone calls report. -Syerapke- (rewrite)
Prompt :
The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995-2004.
The given chart reveals the information regarding Finland inhabitant calls, from 1995 to 2004, in the field of three categories
Overall, the mobile calls, national and international landlines show a gradual increase while calls taken by local-landlines decreased slightly in the last four years.
Turning to the detail, the top notch usage of Finland people was recorded by local-landlines. Appeared by 12000 million minutes, the trend was increased slightly to reach twins-peak by 1700 millions minutes in the middle-length year. Therefore, after a short peak period, such trend experienced a gradual dip which was stood in the last three years.
Standing in contrast, the red chart was increased steadily throughout the survey. Began with 6000 million minutes, the number of calls grew to 10500 million calls in 2004.Then, a significant movement sought in the Finland mobile calls. Albeit this trend commenced with nearly zero point, a fivefold increase to approximately 10000 million minutes was gained; such trend was the tremendous progress in comparison with both counterpart categories.
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Appeared by 12000 million minutes, the trend was increased slightly to reach twins-peak by 1700 millions minutes in the middle-length year.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? What is appeared by 12000 million minutes?
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