The graph on the right side gives information on wages over ten years of period in the USA Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown

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The graph on the right side gives information on wages over ten years of period in the USA.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of growth rate of income over a decade. In addition to that, the line diagram is comparing the percentage of variation in salaries from 1993-2003 in America.

Overall, the growth was almost identical in the rate of wages within a decade. Even though, the peak was recorded in the year 1998 whereas the trough was seen in 2002 in context to the percentage of variance in income.

At the beginning of a decade, the first four years had shown normal fluctuation in terms of people's incomes with a variance of 2-3%. Although, the following years had observed the continuous drastic changes in which the year 1998 was the highest growth rate in wages with 6% and again it drops down to 3%. and then the proportion reached even its lowest value accounted to 1%. However, the percentage of the growth rate of wages was starting to rise in the last year of a decade with a figure of 2%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, then, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38779610686 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468181818182 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8483105326 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0511228249227 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295708334427 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380370063429 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433338226723 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182570772843 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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