Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work late until late at night. Which do you prefer?
Sleep is an inseparable factor from human beings’ life, and sleep habits can have either beneficial or detrimental effects on human life. Generally, there are two kinds of sleep habits among people. One is that people get up early in the morning, start the day’s work, and sleep at an appropriate time at night, while another is that people wake up later in the morning, work until late at night, and sleep later at night. I prefer the former as a result of its positive psychological and health effects.
The first sleep habit has such an immensely positive psychological effect on people that they do their work in an efficacious, prompt, and enthusiastic manner every day. To illustrate what I precisely mean by this, I would like to provide more information. People waking up early in the morning perform much of their work during the daytime, for example until noon, which leads to satisfaction. This satisfaction psychologically affects people, and people continue to follow their work with peace of mind and high spirits. In other words, this feeling of satisfaction can increase an individual’s concentration on his or her work, and then implicitly ameliorates their productivity. On the other hand, people with the latter sleep habit witness their falling behind in their work over the course of the morning as compared to people with the former one. In addition, in order to complete their work, they have to work at nighttime while people in the other group are resting or enjoying recreation. Therefore, they commonly feel a sense of losing a competition, which results in low spirits and low efficiency. This everyday annoying sense accumulates over time, and eventually can cause severe depression.
In addition to negative psychological effects, staying awake until late at night can pose extremely serious health problems. Research has shown that human bodies start throwing away their waste materials and purifying themselves after midnight, as long as humans are asleep. Being awake until late at night disturbs this natural process and causes extreme health problems such as the failure of a heart, a liver, or a brain as time passes. These people have to spend a large amount of money and time on their treatment in the hope that their health will recover. There are also other far-reaching consequences not only for their fellow citizens but also for their country. Too many pecuniary sources, raised by paying taxes for vital measures like education and research, need to be allocated to cure diseases which could easily have been prevented by altering the bad habit. If this process continues for a long time, their country will be plagued with unhealthy human resource, the most precious and constructive resource in developing any nation.
To sum up, I do believe that awakening early has at least two conspicuously important merits, namely positive psychological effects and healthy organs, and I will attempt to adhere to it. I also wish that people would strive to be accustomed to getting up early in order to benefit from its above-mentioned advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: There are other; There are also
...he hope that their health will recover. There are also other far-reaching consequences not only for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2594.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11637080868 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78379571346 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536489151874 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 804.6 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7119015406 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.909090909 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0454545455 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306642116703 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775802092157 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939664077793 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186045276962 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887628130196 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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