The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The modern environment and the foundations on which our present society is built upon constantly faces an uphill and daunting task of never ending problems. The ideological solution to these complex and convoluted problems requires the complete unification of the individuals in the society. To achieve a common motto or a goal or to find a solution to forthcoming problem in the future, we need to instill a sense of cooperation, team-spirit and togetherness in the present youth for them to solve the problems and make the future a more safe and happy place.
Let's take an example: Most of the valuable technological corporations and organizations in the world like Apple, Samsung, Google etc are all trying to provide us with services that make human life holistically a lot easier. But these organizations have a tremendous workforce behind them, that work and toil day and night to provide us with these services. The underlying point being stated that to accomplish a common goal laid out by these big companies or even being the most rudimentary work given to us by our superiors, to achieve it successfully we often end up working in groups or teams. The kind of work and bonding that happens in a group is far more appreciated and productive than that of an individual or egoist, who works only for praise.
Secondly, the kind of interaction, bonding and the ability to empathize with others, all of them can be learnt, understood and polished up while working under a great team. Modern researches that are working in this domain suggest that the learning that an individual person gets from his or her peers in the group he is working with, is far more substantial than that he may obtain when working solo. Working in a team , under the leadership of a great manager or team leader goes a a long way in one's professional life afterwards.
The argument made above has some reservations surrounding it, which when looked into form a significant aspect of human lives. Not everywhere in every scenario or various walks of lives do we need to associate ourselves in a group. Many individuals have worked single-handedly and accomplished a lot. For ex: Mahatma Gandhi, Martin Luther King, etc and many more sowed the seeds of freedom themselves and thus rose to the greatest ranks today. Competition is present and will be there in all walks of lives and in every profession always, but it is our responsibility to ensure that competition never overtakes or surpasses cooperation, which is essential for future success.
Thus in making and establishing the above claims, we can see that cooperation is the way forward and not competition. As long as competition is healthy and within certain limits it is beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2274.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93275488069 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94985038367 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540130151844 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3795714947 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.764705882 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1176470588 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110732087201 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351160330361 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365771703189 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642226325635 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037300398146 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.