DO you agree or disagree that students are engaged in political activities than before?
Politics plays an important role in day today life. Some believe that Students' involvement in political activities are less reactive than before. However, I think students are engaged in various political issues for several reasons.
First of all, advancement in social media has a huge impact on teenagers' lives. They get more information regarding the political party and issues regarding the party they support for. For instance, my elder daughter who is 18, has a strong opinion regarding which party she supports. This is because they get all information from social media like Facebook, twitter etc. She gets daily news from youtube and other media daily, and is more inspired by it. Also, She is ready to vote for her supporting party with a good reason for choosing it. This would not happen if there is no technological advancement.
Moreover, students these days closely monitor any changes in government policies and relative things. Since, these policies have a huge impact on their future career and life, they wanted to know any changes made by the ruling administration regarding tax payment, students loan etc. For example, when I was studying in a university in New York, the ruling party had changed policy regarding student loan payment. They put a halt in providing loans for them, unless the students make an agreement regarding loan return within three years after they graduate. So students are showing a keen interest in political parties and their changing policies as well.
In conclusion, although government policies affect all people in the society in different ways, it is the students who are studying in various universities or about to apply in colleges, more prone to the current political issues and rules. So I Believe that this is due to the change in policies and the technological advancement as discussed before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15181518152 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68759555025 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2446798553 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8235294118 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133580764035 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506738793606 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683323955059 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107566886963 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101600624655 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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