Cement and concrete production

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Cement and concrete production

The pictures illustrate the process by which cement is manufactured and how concrete is made.

Overall, it is clear that, there are several stages in production process of cement and concrete.

In details, it can be seen that, cement is produced from limestone and clay. First of all, these two ingredients are mixed and crushed by crusher in order to become a powder. Once the powder has been formed, it is then passed through the mixer, where it is mixed properly. In the next stage the mixture is heated in the rotating heater. After being heated, the formed mass is gone through the...

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