Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people still continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions to this?"
People all desire for a good life with a good health, but they are still engaged in unhealthy activities. My essay will explain reasons and solutions to this problem.
There are several reasons to support the idea of sticking to harmful activities. First, it is believed that stressful life causes people to be addicted to bad hobbies. When people experience high pressure of work, they turn to smoking or drinking as a way to escape worries and burdens. Some writers even think that these bad hobbies inspire them to come up with creative ideas despite their health deterioration. Second, living w...
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