Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Parents are the best teacher
Parents are the ultimate role models for children. As kids imitate their parents in the childhood, they adapt most of their moral values and virtues in their personalities, which highly reflects when they grow up. Needless to say, their ability to learn and education plays an important role but more than that how much a parents contributes in teaching a child.
To begin with, sharing a major amount of time with adolescents is a primary reason here followed by attention. For instance, many parents observe their kids a lot , and they get to know about their merits and demerits as individuals. By the time, these kids transform into individuals they have already overcome their most of the demerits leading to their high success rate.
Secondly, love and care are other two important factors which adds up empathy , understanding , basic human values in a child. To illustrate, when parents show more affection to their kids from time to time, it results in enhancement of their ability to learn and cooperate with society and themselves. Otherwise, the adults often struggle with their own beliefs and mindsets and aren’t able to cope up with their goals.
Besides, parents who maintain discipline and consistency seem to have an advantage over all other factors. In particular , discipline results in more freedom : that’s when the young people focus on succeeding towards their goals. For many, this can be a stepping stone in influencing a change in the world in future, which can be only possible with parent’s influence.
All in a word, parents are the best teachers as they play a great role in building us individually , be it moral values or academics, they endlessly support us by placing a stepping stone which further leads to a milestone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a parent' or simply 'parents'?
Suggestion: a parent; parents
...ortant role but more than that how much a parents contributes in teaching a child. To be...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e, many parents observe their kids a lot , and they get to know about their merits...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... important factors which adds up empathy , understanding , basic human values in a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rs which adds up empathy , understanding , basic human values in a child. To illus...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ge over all other factors. In particular , discipline results in more freedom : th...
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Line 6, column 307, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ne in influencing a change in the world in future, which can be only possible with parent...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a great role in building us individually , be it moral values or academics, they e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, second, secondly, so, for instance, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04794520548 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72139168514 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8312995209 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129067409571 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513374041642 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346883118156 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788768811118 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137307816228 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.