Some people think online courses will soon replace traditional courses thanks to the benefits it brings about.
While other claim that traditional courses cannot be replaced. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There can be no doubt that the topic of courses is one which deserves some analysis. It is the opinion of the writer that the weight of evidence tips the sacle towards those who believe studying via the Internet should be choosen more and more by people.
On the one hand, within the world where plently of diseases occur unpredictably such as Corona virus nowadays, instead of spending time on going to schools, there will be an oppotunity for students to continueously have classes. Furthermore, learners are more flexible by being at privite houses and sign in whatever courses which are suitable for their schedule.
On the other hand, it can not be denied that online option is not as effective as offline option. In the view of teachers, especially with primary school, it will be easier to control the student and manage the attention of these pupils in comparision with teaching them through computer screens. In the view of high school students whose concentrations are often distracted, they should have more face to face contact with the tutor as well as asking and being asked during the period.
In contrast, not only do online classes solve financial problems but also creating conveniences, which is an ideal choice for people nowadays. Due to the reduction of tuition fee, many students can concern less about the payment. In adddition, students do not have to go overseas to attend courses which is in the international university having well reputations to get a further education by participating in online courses.
Thus, it can be seen that the effect from a traditional course is outwieghed by online’s current suitability and convenience. Therefore, there is ample evidence to conclude that direct class will be replaced by online class because it rapidly becomes out of the new trend in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...irus nowadays, instead of spending time on going to schools, there will be an oppotunity...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g and being asked during the period. In contrast, not only do online classes so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in contrast, no doubt, of course, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02614379085 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73064980811 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1669741687 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210183126603 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753864615187 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489523268423 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11268927351 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480088452526 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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