People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, opinions about the similarity of people in the world have various interpretations. One part of people claims that all people are resemblant, but others are sure that they have differences. I agree with this statement, because people have more similarities, than they are able to recognise them.
Firstly, all people have the general needs, which let them live. In other words, everybody needs to rest and to work, both of them are connected, because people can’t work all time long and they are losing their strength during the act. If they do not relax in time, they can get sick and lose their job. Moreover, the main need for people is food, as nobody is able to live without eating. There are a lot of examples, when people died due to absence of any food and water. According to the statistics about dwellers of Africa or the same example about World War II, where most part of people were dead owing to starving.
Secondly, religion makes people similar. Some people are sure that somebody in the sky or under the earth manages their lives. These people attend the churches and other places, which connect with their religions. Besides, here are a lot of different beliefs, and all of them have their own followers. On the contrary, even if people claim that they are atheists and they deny everything supernatural, they continue to believe in non-existence (atheism). Equally, it can be another type of faith, such as belief in themselves or science. In addition, any belief and confidence in their own point of view about existence or absence of the Gods make people similar, because they follow one way of the ideas about life, world construction and others. For instance, The Guardian has written that all people follow their religion, even if she does not concern the Creator.
In conclusion, I can say that similarities of people around the world exceed their differences. As for me, there are lots of things why people would be completely similar, such as feelings, needs, religion. Even these are different, their existence makes people similar.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91168091168 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54792618128 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54415954416 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4908533714 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260921734185 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885693627593 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539891180185 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183050423315 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474233421322 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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