Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subject that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Undeniably, For the education system, it is a major topic to discuss which productive subject should be allowed to a student for their future. Some believe that it should depend on the student's choice and they can choose anything that they want to study. However, others considered permitting only important subjects to studies such as science and technology. In my opinion, I strongly believe that every subject should allow and students can select whatever they like.
To begin with, many people argue that the university should allow only a considerable subject. In this technological era, they think that it is essential to subject to a student`s career. Also, In the professional world, it is required to have a higher degree in the major subjects. Thus, after graduating in an elective subject, students can easily find a job in their fields and set their position with high salary wages.
Next, I think that if students take a subject which they like then they can make their career in their personal way. Furthermore, satisfaction is more important in any field. So, if students do not have an interest in elective subjects to learn then it may be not beneficial to themself. Likewise, if they have talent in other subjects then they can pick their profession in that specific area. As an illustration, Dharmesh yelande, who is the best dance choreographer in India. he has done a degree in the dance field. he has a yearly income of $5 million which many engineers not have. Consequently, it has been said that "Always go with the choice to make the right future."
To recapitulate, because of this hi-tech world, many people consider choosing a technological profession. But, if you have true dedication, passion, and hard work towards future goals then you can make a better future in any field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, so, then, thus, i think, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01315789474 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85838417831 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.563354506 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6470588235 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326435282185 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102212186034 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924700452246 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198136795234 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134322475809 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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