In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying
Nowadays, there are several supporters of the idea that traditional newspapers or books in the future will no longer be purchased since the international network will allow people to achieve information in a completely free of charge way. From my perspective, while the beneficial impacts of online newspapers are undeniable, I believed printed journals will still be necessary for our life due to various reasons
On the one hand, there is a variety of advantages that online newspapers or books bring. Among them, the fundamental benefit of it is the convenience and time-saving. By reading newspapers or books online, people are able to save a great deal of time travelling to bookstores or libraries. Furthermore, since every information can be contained in the smartphone and other portable devices, it is apparently much easier to carry them by your side. By the way of illustration, you can check the news or read books on your phone anywhere you go without worrying about the illumination. Another plus point that is worth mentioning is due to the fact that online information can be transport at a breakneck speed thanks to the development of the international network. It can be said that you can gain any lastest news just in the blink of an eye.
Nevertheless, the merits of traditional newspaper and books should not be underestimated. First and foremost, it provides the reader with a far more reliable source of information. There seem to be shreds of evidence that along with the swift update of online news is its unreliability. This is shown by a wide range of fake news on the internet with the purpose of misleading readers in order to increase views and reactions. The traditional newspaper and books, on the contrary, contain only knowledge that underwent strict inspection and censorship. In the second place, not everybody can approach the online information source. It is irrefutable that using electronic devices for too long is very detrimental to health. Therefore, for numerous people, especially the elderly or with some particular disorders, printed magazines are still their optimal choice.
To sum up, despite all the boons of online source of information, the printed news and books are not likely to disappear in the future as it is a much reliable means of achieving knowledge as well as it is suitable with the majority of population including the elderly or people with special condition
- Recently some foods travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumer Some people think it would be better for our environment and economy if people only eat locally produced food Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 80
- The flow chart illustrates the consequences of deforestation Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children s development than playing computer games To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and doing word puzzles Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time 78
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, as well as, by the way, on the contrary, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0247634205 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0514636306 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.823529412 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5294117647 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229224401328 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636063673436 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062663933943 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137322721068 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658081353553 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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