The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far overweigh the disadvantages.
Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.
Since the growth of technology enabled the human to empower the world through nuclear trends which are in race of almost all nations in this planet. It has been observed that nuclear weapons successfully maintain the harmony and peace among the world nations, moreover, it is also an affordable and pollution free source of electricity. I certainly agree that the advantages of nuclear technology over eclipsed drawbacks.
It is an undeniable fact that the predominant countries are in a race to produce dangerous weapons which accessible them to frighten other enemy nations. As a result, nearly all states avoid conflicts with each other, in order to prevent damage to their own citizens and properties. A recent study, for an illustration, being published by The economics Times revealed that a trade war between China and USA were in the edge of military war in the last year, however, as both nations are empowered with nuclear weapons, initiated to avoid military war, after discussion with great leaders of the world. Therefore, this example speaks about how nuclear weapons enable the world nation to keep harmony and peace on the planet.
Apart from this, we should not forget that fossil fuels are limited source of energy and once upon a time, the sources will be depleted from this planet. Consequently, the experts should find sustainable energy sources which are not only pollution free, but also allow individuals to use at affordable cost of living. For an illustration, the European nations such as Netherlands and Switzerland have already adopted hydroelectric plant and wind turbine machinery, particularly in industrial areas, which allow them to produce almost zero emission carbon dioxide and nearly half percentage of prices than fuel. Hence, these both nations have set an example of how nuclear power help humans to confront the global crisis of air pollution and the unaffordability of fuel cost.
To sum up, even though nuclear innovation are not recommended by many world leaders, it supports the world to maintain consistency and unity, in addition to the source of green energy which is eco-friendly compared to the contemporary energy sources. In my perspective, the benefits of nuclear power outweigh the drawbacks.
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- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy The benefits of nuclear technology far overweigh the disadvantages Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since the growth of technology enabled the hu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23480662983 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78922502828 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577348066298 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1254413158 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.769230769 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233359157602 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949678359556 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724149080923 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165489907322 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807945824934 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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