You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter,
apologize for damaging the product
explain what happened
say how are you going to fix the issue
I hope you are well. I am extremely thankful to you for offering / for lending me your favourite badminton racket for my match yesterday as you were aware that I had lost my racket at the university campus.
However, I would like to apologise for damaging it while playing. I know how much you value this racket and hearing this will be immensely painful for you. While playing, I was feeling so comfortable with your racket, and was enjoying every one of my shots. During the intense match I missed a shot and the racket hit the ground and due to that one of its strings broke.
I know a few shops in my neighbourhood which specialise in mending sports gear. I will take this racket to one such shop and they should fix it in a day’s time.
I hope you can understand the situation and forgive me.
See you soon,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... they should fix it in a day’s time. I hope you can understand the situation a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43421052632 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45238304091 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3841567779 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173798154961 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718584346698 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499006536984 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927523954751 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550360280085 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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