Children and teenagers are committing more and more crime in many countries. Why is this happening ? How can we stop or at least reduce youth crime?
In the contemporary era, crime rate has been in increasing in all over the world and younger children are more influence to commit crime. This essay shall shed light on the various reasons for the existence of this problem along with some ways to adress the issue.
To begin with, there are umpteen causes of doing crime by adolescents. First of all, nowadays both parents are working and they do not have enough time to spend with their children. As they are not mature enough to decide what is inferior or superior for them they stuck in life threatening problems. For instance, teenagers are not be able to talk with their parents about their difficulties then they indulge in bad activities like burglery, murder and drugs racket. Secondly, there is no doubt that the majority of crimes are doing by poor children because they do not have enough money to fulfil their needs then they have left with only one option that is crime.
On the other hand, there are various solutions to overcome this problem. The prominent solution is that it is the duty of parents to spend time kids so that they know about their situations and also they have to keep an eagle eye on the activities of their little ones. Moreover, adolescents also need to encourage study and participate in physical games such as cricket, badminton, basketball and so on. Due t involvement in games they can stays away from crime.
In gist, I would like to assert that every problem has solution to deal with. Government and parents have to motivate juveniles to indulge in good pursuit so that condition of every nation is improve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40534057158 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.061146324 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.307692308 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132631679318 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530697381696 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692438454116 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854573614317 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783871237626 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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