Some people think the government should make clauses regarding nutrition and healthy life style, while others think that it is a matter of personal choice and personal responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern era, majority of people are busy in their work life and do not find enough time to do exercise or take healthy food. Some people believe that it should be the duty of authorities to make rules and regulations for healthy lifestyle whereas others oppose the trend and opine that individual have to take care of their health on their own. I personally favour the former perspective; however, my essay shall dwell both the viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, according to people who consider government make clauses think that they fulfil all the responsibility of being a good citizen like pay taxes properly and follow all strict action so it should be the authorities who has to keep a check on the nutritional values of food that is offered in restaurants, schools and college campus. Secondly, bureaucrats has to provide free health seminars and checkup to each individual. For instance, countries like America and Canada provide free medical facilities to every native person because they wanted to make their citizens healthy and proud.
On the other hand, people love to live their life according to their own preference. If they are put on a strict diet then they may fall for those things more than before. As, it is a matter of personal choice individuals are the one who take measures to stay healthy and take proper diet. Moreover, nowadays there are various social sites that offered help to provide free diet chart and they even take the help of doctors to follow diet method. For example, various applications give help to each individual regarding calories, vitamins and exercises such as my diet coach, lifesum, water drinking habit etcetera. Because of these sites, masses may be able to lead a healthy lifestyle.
In my perspective, governments has to take measures to help their citizens to live a nutritious life and also provide the better standard of living.
In gist, I would like to assert that healthy diet is a major concern both individual and authorities has to make decisions for the betterment of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95505617978 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64846976993 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553370786517 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2975421815 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209814250317 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064262400825 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452851386664 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105879937932 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422930682565 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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