The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
Young minds are very impressionable and could pick up and adhered to it very adamantly hence we should make sure that they are inculcating habits that will help them grow. while maintaining a healthy competition is very desirable for growth at individual and team level but at the same time they should make sure they are helping or cooperating to their peers or colleague so that they grow as a team as well if they are in a team
Just like "necessity is root of all invention", competition is the motivation some might need in their development. for example, let us say there are two students X and Y, X wrote a paper on the thesis he is doing, for any competitive person, this acts as driving factor and helps in performing better relatively. as long as competition is healthy it can prove a big driving factor.
For leadership in any sector, the team leader has to be a team player and he can be a team player only if he was co-operating with his team members in past, dissension among team members will never help in making any progress towards the goal, for example, if the members are unhealthy competing among themselves, they won't get any work done, as everyone will be working on pulling each other down. for example, I was working in an ad industry and we were working on developing a product for ads delivery on an ad request call from publishers, so if developers have to work together instead of opposite to each other but at the time they can engage in a few healthy competitions like which programming language to be used for product development, they can build small components in various languages and see which is working better
As I gave an example of how competition can act as a motivation factor any individual and can help him grow but the same individual can crumble under the competition as well, that is when he can take help from his colleague, friends, parents, or even any professional to keep in check
Competition can act as a big motivation factor for any individual but at the time he or she should make sure they don't crumble under the pressure of it and keeps everything in check.and for overall growth at the individual level as well team must, leadership must inculcate the thought of "healthy competition along with co-operation"
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, well, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71215880893 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93129104086 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481389578164 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 23.0359550562 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 329.036809829 60.3974514979 545% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 316.5 118.986275619 266% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.1666666667 23.4991977007 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154368177809 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800641379616 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340884756979 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900505771571 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337663732482 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 14.1392134831 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 48.8420337079 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 12.1743820225 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.8 11.2143820225 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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