Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Drivers should pay a fee for driving in busy city streets when there is heavy traffic.
Cities where we live in has a mutual interaction with people, and in this relation we have a reciprocal effects on each other. Quality of life depends on many factors such as environment and behavour of folks, which impact diverse aspects of our life. Even though some persons believe that we should have right to go every where in cities freely, some others like me think that it is better to have a strict discipline to keep our cities clean and better place for a living. In what follows I will elaborate on my reasons.
The first exqusite points that come to my mind is all the city centers and downtowns are bustleing and there are a crowd of people's car, if they are allowed to use their private cars what will happen is a polluted air and a very noisy encvironment. One of the best way to decrease this problem is putting some fee for who bring their cars. With this policy people who can use public transportation will use trains and subways, and they not only help environment to stay clean, but they also use their time in a more effic ient way. For example, I can recall when I lived in Tehran, capital of Iran and one of the most polluted cities in the world, there was three level of restriction for people fwho want to use personal cars. Actually, the difference brtween these regions was clearly tangible. In the city center where people paid more money there were not any private cars. Had the city not had this plan, now nobody could go to the downtown and spend some hours because of the rising pollution.
The second reason which is worth mentioning here is these street asphalts have a capacity, which it is not infinite, then they need repairment. when some people want to use these street for private usage it is logical to pay for their benefit. For instance, there are some streets in Boston downtown that not only you should pay when going there, but also if you want to park car should pay a lot. I recently read a report in a local news paper that city announced they paid two million dollars to repaire only ten streets in the downtown in the last five years. The reporter alege that it is not fair that this surcharge is paid by the tax revenue because it is a surcharge for all people who use theses street or not. The writer suggested that getting some money from individuals with private car will provide municipilary enough money to repair them without need to tax which belongs to all people.
In conclusion, considering all aforementioned reasons and details, I strongly believe that city center streets should be limit for private cars and who want go there shoud pay. That is because with this plan we will have a better environment with cleaner air. And becaues city can maintain the streets and pavements in a good condition with this revenue which comes straight forward from pocket of people who use these streets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 514.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56225680934 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33280814101 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492217898833 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1855104411 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199505208656 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665248816373 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603193214408 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133450168385 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472347873858 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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