"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Young individuals of any nation are the driving force of any nations developement. Young men and women, who have the charateristics to be a leader are an assset to a nation. The main facet of the term "leadership" is cooperation. The prompts states that in order to have young leaders in government, industries and other fields, it is recommended that society to encourge cooperation instead of competition. In my opinion I mostly agree with this suggestion due to three reasons.
Firstly, an impactful leader is one who cooperates with juniors, listens to everyones' point of view and then takes a decision. Young individuals who have a potential to lead an organisation need to have this trait of cooperativeness in them. For example, supposedly young individual encounters a problem at a manufacturing compant at shop floor level where in his expertise is not enough to tackle the problem. As a result, he will have to make a team of members who can work together and help him in tackling the problem. In above mentioned scenario, the society can help the young Team Lead to cooperate with other people to solve a specific problem, thereby improving the teams probem solving abilities as well as instill a "trait of coordination" with other members.
Secondly, an organisation is made up of people and to successfully run an organisation, cooperation between various department heads/ Team leads is necessary. For instance, the Chelsea Football Club under -19 has an elite team of young soccer players. However, even if the players are gold standard, it does not neccesarily mean that the team will win silverware each and every season. As we know, soccer is a team sport and any team requires a leader/captain. Moreover, the society can help in creating a leader by having team oriented tasks and where cooperation is more required and trait of coordinationg with other members will be instilled.
However, a competative spirit in a young leader is also neccessary in order to carry out a task assigned to him/his team which need to be completed in time and with outmost efficacy. For instance, a task is assigned by a manager to two teams and the one who gets the job done will have an opportunity to work on an interesting and major project. In above scenario, an competative spirit is neccessary. Moreover, this competative spirit will go hand in hand with the cooperative spirit of the leader wherein he will have to guide the team to compelete the task in the given time with high efficiency, both working in tandem will instill competetiveness as well as cooperation.
In sum, society can prepare young individuals for leadership in an organization by putting them in situations where in they are forced to cooperative with everyone and thereby inculcating a sense of cooperation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y inculcating a sense of cooperation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2356.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03418803419 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19922247932 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489316239316 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2839905685 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144256399717 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475441050132 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455736117208 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102010325577 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474479902051 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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