You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
explain why you are selling the furniture.
describe the furniture.
suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture
Dear Ryan,
Congratulations once again on your wedding. How was your honeymoon in Paris? I am just writing to let you know that we were planning to sell our couch and thought of you because you really like the last time you were here on my birthday.
The reason for this change is that we bought a new house in Oakville and the sofa is small for the living room. We also adopted a puppy last month and quickly realized that we will need a new sofa in a different material as his hair is sticking to this one.
as you know this sofa which also turns into a bed when required. Do you remember the sofa you slept on when you stayed over in January? It is very comfortable, actually, my wife and I have spent a few nights on the couch ourself when my parents were in town. It’s in such a beautiful green color and I believe will also fit in perfectly with your décor.
Why don’t you and Lucy come over to our new house for Brunch this Sunday. We would love to get to know her better since we have only met her once at the wedding. I am so sure after hearing about our new dog Tommy you are dying to meet him too. This is a great chance for you to check out the sofa as well.
Look forward to seeing you here on Sunday.
Warm Wishes
Karry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ryan, Congratulations once again on your weddi...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al as his hair is sticking to this one. as you know this sofa which also turns ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... his hair is sticking to this one. as you know this sofa which also turns int...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...his hair is sticking to this one. as you know this sofa which also turns int...
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Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... also fit in perfectly with your décor. Why don’t you and Lucy come over to our ...
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Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eing you here on Sunday. Warm Wishes Karry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14693877551 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07387911748 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575510204082 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2782793065 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242874220566 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084557839988 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782380974056 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149256177446 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09299777046 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.85 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.