You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter,
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mary,
How are you doing? I am just writing this letter to introduce myself and inform you about my son Max’s birthday party next week.
My name is Karry and I have recently moved in next door in the house no. 567. I am a marketing manager and I have been working with the Royal Bank of Canada since 2010. I live with my two kids and a husband, who is a dentist and runs his own practice in downtown. My kids also go to The King high school and in fact, my younger one is in the same class as your son.
This coming Saturday is my son’s 8th birthday and we are planning to throw a birthday party in our backyard. It is going to be a whole day’s affair with live music and children running around making noise but be rest assured that we will try our best not to cause any disturbance. The party will start around noon and hopefully, continue into the evening. There will a BBQ station, some live music along with some entertainment activities involving clowns, magicians, and mime artists.
I would like to invite you and your family for this party and would love it if you guys could make it. There will be other kids from around the neighborhood as well as their fellow classmates. The theme for the party is ‘pirates’ and you can drop by 11:45 am, which is when the artists will start their performances.
I look forward to seeing you and your son Peter here on Saturday.
Warm Wishes
Karishma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mary, How are you doing? I am just writing thi...
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...r son is in the same class as your son. The coming Saturday is my son’s 8th birt...
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...ing clowns, magicians and mime artists. I would like to invite you and your fami...
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...nce artists will start their showcases. I look forward to seeing you and your so...
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Line 11, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ou and your son Peter here on Saturday. Warm Wishes Karishma
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...Peter here on Saturday. Warm Wishes Karishma
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...Saturday. Warm Wishes Karishma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, in fact, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3373015873 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25735758472 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2641508314 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8666666667 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250219772244 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707817112237 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701825743869 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140801037686 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489197541726 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.