Your daughter wants to study English at a language school in the town of Weymouth next year. write a letter to the school. In your letter
Ask for information about the courses
explain that your daughter is interested in social events
find out what accommodation is available
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am James Charles, father of Maire Charles who wants to study English language at your school.
I would like to get the information about the English courses such as on which dates it would be held next year, what are the timings and duration of classes. Could you let me know the about other programs at your institute along with the fee details since she would find some leisure time and might be interested in joining.
Maire has been very active in social events and she took part of many activities, she has the passionate about educating and empowering the society. For which she received award at her school for educating fellow mates about the consequences of wasting food.
The town of Weymouth is near to our house, but would like to know what are the accommodation offered at the campus. She is quite existed to stay at your facility, eat with all the other classmates and socialize with them and experience it all by herself. As travelling to and forth would consume time which she could utilize else where.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
John Mathews
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80612244898 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39874064557 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2542653312 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272789229781 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977930735609 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651402185932 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131537974355 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858881615087 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.