Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?
Indubitably, technology spread its tentacles into our daily life, and plays a salient role, in this contemporary era everything has changed due to advancement in technology, many inhabitants optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make an absolute change to the world, I completely agree with this notion and my opinion also be highlighted while concluding this.
To begin with, there are two rudimentary reasons behind this optimism. Firstly, technology has always been fruitful since he was developed, there are some pertinent reasons behind this, technology developed in various fields such as telecommunication, construction, and majorly in transportation. Three decades ago human beings communicate with each other through letters, hence, it takes enormous time for short conversation but after the revolution in telecommunication through smartphone individuals can talk and communicate in seconds. Moreover, in order to quick construction the machines being changed since it's advancement. Secondly, It's convenience, the transportation vehicles have been replace by the mordern electric vehicles which are more convenient than typical fuel-based vehicles.
Furthermore, the bourgeois has immense opportunity after development in machines, more importantly, there are two basic opportunities behind this. Firstly, a person can get a better job, the job will be less hard work as well as limited hours of working, having a good job, a person can live lavishly.
Secondly, modernization through the internet, the business would be more than easier than the past. For Example, a huge number of people have started startups through the world wide web which is not only affordable but also faster than any other medium. Additionally, they can get colossal funding through the internet and expand their business efficiently.
In conclusion, being optimistic about technology would be worthwhile in some ways, I opt that mankind will get maximum positive benefits for staying optimistic, technology will change the whole world in expected years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 697, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'replaced'.
Suggestion: replaced
..., the transportation vehicles have been replace by the mordern electric vehicles which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68810289389 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19488934953 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646302250804 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5691662969 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.416666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138288756806 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041941758578 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061274340759 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806054609221 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760096911049 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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