Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should state their honest opinions even though they know others will disagree with their views. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Communication is one of the most vital needs for humans. In this regard, talking with people paly an essential role, and knowing that how to talk with different people is a talent. While some people believe that we should be honest and thell the truth all times, others disagree. In my opinion, being honest always is not a magical way to excel in real world and we need to talk in different way sometimes. In the following essay I will elaborate on my reasons.
To begin with, telling the truth sometimes is not attractive for some audience and it may hurt their emotion. When our opinion is different with our friends there is a tricky situation. if we want to speak frankly, we should consider many measures to be polite and convey our thought in a savvy manner to be productive rather than destructive. Since everybody has a various idea about divers topics, speaking our mind when it is sopposed to give our comment and being prodent make us to talk in a way that may differ from being totally honest. For example, whenever I am tutoring my eight-year old daughter her math, versus the reality I dicide to tell her that she is doing very well. With thsi strategy, not only do I encourage her to endeavor to assimilate hard lesson of math, but also I avoid to hurt her emotions when we are beside eachother. Had I told her my honest opinion about her talent in math, she would not attempt so much and she would be at the same level that she was at first.
Second, many people do not like the reality and they are living in their fantasy dream, and if you be honest with them you will be in trouble as soon as possible. There are myriad persons that need to be aknowledge but not accept the reality. If you must tolearte them in your freind zone you do not have choice but to tell what ever they want. Otherwise you will face many difficulties. My last challenge with one of my roommate in doormitory was a vivid example of this. She used to cut her hair in a very specific style which it was not suitable for a grad student. After every haircut she asked me about her fashion. First time I told her my honest idea and she got upset and did not talk with me for two days. Finally, I figured out that she just asked me to tell her that her style was good and she did not want to accept the real ideas.
In sum, I strongly believe that being honest even is a virtue but it is not feasible in many situations. Many time telling the truth discourage people and may kill their potentials. In other situation, many folks love to be admired even it is not ture and if you have thsoe kinds of relative or friends you are in troble if you be honest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Communication is one of the most vital n...
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...essay I will elaborate on my reasons. To begin with, telling the truth sometim...
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...audience and it may hurt their emotion. When our opinion is different with our frien...
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...ur friends there is a tricky situation. if we want to speak frankly, we should con...
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...res to be polite and convey our thought in a savvy manner to be productive rather than destructiv...
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...the same level that she was at first. Second, many people do not like the real...
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...choice but to tell what ever they want. Otherwise you will face many difficulties. My las...
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...it was not suitable for a grad student. After every haircut she asked me about her fa...
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...id not want to accept the real ideas. In sum, I strongly believe that being ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, frankly, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31526104418 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29335291424 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491967871486 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.614528565 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5416666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209948418612 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643700590322 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531191077305 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139267723609 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333067305861 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.