1 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People should state their honest opinions even though they know others will disagree with their views. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In today's modern life, expressing our honest opinion about different matters is a priority when considering its significant effect on our lives in many aspects. In this regard, many would rather have a group acceptance than say their honest feeling and opinion and jeopardize their approval in a group. I, though, hold the opposite view for some reason, on which I will elaborate in the following essay.
First, expressing our genuine opinion without being worried about others’ reactions can make us more confident. In general, for giving our real view in the first step, we need to excavate our feelings and realize our genuine intention for an issue, and in the next step, we have to find the courage to express them. By doing so, we send this message that we care about our wants and willing even if they are not going to be accepted and respected by others. Consequently, by repeating that manner even if we had pretended for a couple of times, we will gradually come to believe that we respect ourselves, which will result in increasing our confidence.
Furthermore, saying our honest opinion could allow us to establish stronger connections and build better friendships. Mostly, we expect our friends to be frank with us; in fact, we can trust them much better if we are sure that they act genuinely in most cases, and the consequence of their different but real opinion does not matter to them. For example, when I was 18, I was blindly in love with a boy that I could not see any of his faults in our relationship, and any time I blamed myself for anything that was going wrong. One of my friends continually was telling me that I was making many mistakes in case of him, but I accused her of being jealous of me. A few months later, when he cheated on me and left me high and dry, I began to realize that how right she was about most of the things, and from that time, I knew that she is the most credible person in my life to count on her in my issues even if I did not like her opinions.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, expressing our genuine opinion about different matters in different cases not only help us to be more confident but also can provide us with real and safe relationships, in which each of the peers trusts each other, and care about the consequences of their words for one another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55213270142 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52069554327 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523696682464 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5682062198 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.769230769 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4615384615 20.6045352989 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14038766242 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588618187098 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425053406903 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999714612974 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388234569225 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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