Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organisations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Indubitably, nowadays most volunteering organisations have shown a substantial contribution in the distinct stages of a poor person's life. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of the society vehemently deems that Charity organisations should help people of their own country only while other emphasizes that these organisations should give aid to those people generally who are in great need where ever they live.
Apparently, various factors makes a section of people advocate that these organisations should offer help to people of their own country and have reasons to substantiate it. To begin with, some organisations are really tiny in size as well as an assets and that is why it becomes ardous to help needy masses of another Nations. Consequently, organisations should raise their funds. Secondly, some volunteering institutes are only interested in helping people of their own country because of Patriotism. To corroborate, nations like Iraq, Pakistan and Afganistan do not like to help other country's people because these Nations have their own rules and religion and moreover they are proud of their Nation and owing to this Pride they do not prefer to help masses of other religion and country.
On the other hand,some believe that these organisations should give aid to all people of all countries who are in great need. Chiefly,there are some greater Charity institutes which are extremely interested in helping needy masses across all over the world. According to BBC, one of the charity organisation namely Khalsa Aid helped more than 76% of people all over the world in this pandemic period by providing food, masks, sanitizers and other essential commodities. Moreover, these kind of volunteering organizations have promoted oneness among all nations. Through an interview conducted in the year 2019 it revealed that organizations like Khalsa Aid do not support racism and they believe that all the people are born out from one God only.
In my profound opinion, if an organization wants to help people then in that case it should provide help to those masses which are in great need no matter wherever they live because these kind of institutes are generally run for social welfare of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, kind of, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24585635359 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87810439984 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0772825297 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.076923077 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.538275272363 0.244688304435 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193573354127 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14000846161 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328890480768 0.151304729494 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703848325876 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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