The world’s air pollution levels are rising year on year. Discuss what you feel are the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
The growing level of airborne pollutants has proven to be a major obstacle for humanity in the 21st century. To address this issue, encouraging popular understanding is a paramount first step. This essay will examine the major causes and effects of atmospheric pollution.
Firstly, the greatest causes of airborne pollution growth today come as a result of both progression in the developing world and wastage in the developed world. For example, as the affluence of over 2 billion Indian and Chinese people continues to grow, sales of pollution-causing vehicles will move in tandem. As this phenomenon compounds with the tremendous levels of pollution already coming out of the developed world, a recipe for unshrinking levels of air pollution can be seen. Thus, demand for petrol vehicles in the developing world and resource wastage in the developed world can be concluded today’s greatest causes of airborne pollutants.
The effects of these airborne pollutants tend to manifest themselves as health issues. For instance, it is estimated that a larger percentage of children have asthma today than ever before in human history. To make matters worse, scientists are now finding air pollution can cause abnormal foodstuffs growth among farming population the world over, and consumption of these foods has been linked to cancer. Thus, growing asthma and cancer rates are the most chilling effects of the world’s rising air pollution.
Following this look, unfortunate trends in the developed and developing worlds are inciting swelling numbers of asthma and cancer sufferers. These are considered to be the most significant causes and effects of the planet’s air pollution levels. Thus, controlling byproducts of human activity has to become central to humanity’s collective strategy for the 21st century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foodstuffs'' or 'foodstuff's'?
Suggestion: foodstuffs'; foodstuff's
...inding air pollution can cause abnormal foodstuffs growth among farming population the wo...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...odstuffs growth among farming population the world over, and consumption of these...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47517730496 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89975534439 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9316954052 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253377884471 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09564563067 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057681108158 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159602686283 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167433262162 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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