For some people, making a lot of money is an important goal. Others think that their free time is more important than wealth. Which is more important to you? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.
Many people claim that earning a rich amount of money to build a wealthy lifestyle is the integral meaning of life, while their counterparts strongly believe that enjoying spare time is more important than money. From my own outlook, I totally see an eye to eye with the point of view that a comfortable lifestyle may be of paramount importance.
To begin with, it is necessary for people to earn a rich amount of money. People who have a great deal of money could live a luxurious lifestyle. They could spend money on five-star restaurants or luxury hotels. Moreover, they are able to extensively travel across the globe and undergo the most appropriate services.
However, many people argue that the meaning of life is not determined by fortune. Being well-off could satisfy their physical needs, it, however, is not able to reach the mental demands. It is true to say that happiness comes from the inner, thus, to be happy, people should take time for their own life. Hence, an enjoyable life is considered more vital than wealth.
In conclusion, while scores of people strongly believe that money plays a decisive role in life, I totally argue that a happy life is more essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, thus, well, while, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54118327886 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1073999898 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4545454545 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211840286261 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765909423856 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653177743702 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120287491517 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376048383555 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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