Some think we should take more measures to deal with criminals. However, others think that there is not much we can do to curb law-breaking. Discuss both sides and give your own opinions.
In the modern century, the world suffers from the increase in crime rate throughout many nations, which eventually breeds the fear of innocent civilians. Some insist we should take more actions to tackle criminals and others believe there is not much we can do to reduce-curb and I lay my thoughts alongside the more actions as well.
There are many facts making us think that we can do nothing to reduce criminals rate. Firstly, most stringent punishments such as death penalties are enforced, the crime rate is still on the rise. Secondly, it is difficult to control the motives for committing a crime because of them stem from people’s greed or hatred which built-in nature. Thirdly, the development and expansion of many people who engage in criminal activities more and more difficult to eliminate.
In spite of the above argument, I support the view that there are many ways to address the root problems. Firstly, identify the causes of different types of crimes, the motive of criminals and then imposing stricter punishment could act as a deterrent so would-be criminals will think twice and discouraged to re-offend. Secondly, rehabilitation programs could allow inmates to engage in sports, religious activities, vocational training and this help those have better employment opportunities after being released, so they are less likely to recommit a crime then reduce the overall crime rate. Finally, educating people, especially young people, to teach them basic laws that people are often unaware of and media should cover incidents that people commit crime due to their ignorance of legislations.
In conclusion, the fact that impose stricter punishment on committing offences could not prevent the crime rate rising, either to greedy nature. However, eradicating the root cause of crime by providing education and employment opportunities is a far better option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32107023411 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77923000434 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598662207358 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3598658856 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.583333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169946285645 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625234038563 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103551331614 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108221089897 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931570946979 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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