Competitiveness is a positive quality for people to have among most societies. How does this competitiveness affect individuals? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, it is considered that it is better if people in most societies have a quality called competitiveness. To some certain extent, competitiveness takes vital accountability in personality. Notwithstanding its merits, there are some negative effects on people.
Competitiveness comes from intrinsic motivations of each individual in our modern life. For example, many people suppose that competitiveness in work gives them a chance to upgrade their life standard. Therefore, they did some attempt to get their own goals, get better healthcare, profesional personal image and favorable life conditions. Significantly, competitiveness helps people realize their drawbacks and give them an attempt to improve some other skills. Moreover, people's desires of success also take a major contributor to our society, which is completely civilized and enlightened with advanced people.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned advantages of competitiveness, (it does something a disservice) there are also some drawbacks on individuals. The faster society develops, the more competitive humans are. Trying to attain an eleventy of desire, people can become exhausted, even envious and jealous. They are always ready for finding any ways, tools and tricks to get profitable results no matter how inferior they are. Snowing under with tons of terrible plans, no matter how rich and successful they are, they will have no happiness and satisfaction in their remaining life. Therefore, it acts as a precursor of destruction of a solidary society and a thriving economy.
In conclusion, competitiveness is appraised as a positive quality, but in some certain cases, it is the origin of development of frustration, dissatisfaction and envy in our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70384615385 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48800777305 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626923076923 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0528196814 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224870326902 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072444940927 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509328448868 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13407330424 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303140115783 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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