Imagine a foreigner from developed country plans to visit your city. What would he like and dislike about your city?
Nowadays people like to travel around the world because travelling is much easier and cheaper from past. My city is much developed from past, if someone wants to visit, some area did not. I will discuss like and dislike in further paragraphs.
To begin with, there are many places that attract foreigners such as Dumas beach, fort, etc. Few years ago Surat Municipal Corporation refurbished the old fort which was built by Britishers. The fort is converted to wax museum, in which SMC put the statue of some famous personality. One more thing is that Surat is in the second place for cleanliness, thus foreigners like to stay in Surat. In addition, they would like the food of Surat because verity of foods has been made. The Dumas beach is the main attraction for everyone because the beach is very clean and quite. Some people go for jogging in morning. Surat is known for textile business, that's why the textile products such as Saree, Dress materials are in the best quality, foreigner should like and buy this products.
On the other hand, in Surat city central zone, which has main business of it has not developed yet because most of Surat's population is living there. Also, this area is very crowded area that foreigners would not like to visit. Moreover, the situations of roads are very poor and this can cause the traffic. Traffic causes air and noise pollution. It is difficult to stay for foreigners in those areas.
To conclude that, foreigners definitely will like my city because there are less poor areas than good areas. Also, everyone should visit Surat city once in lifetime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'quiet'? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'
Suggestion: quiet
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...g. Surat is known for textile business, thats why the textile products such as Saree,...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... quality, foreigner should like and buy this products. On the other hand, in Sura...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, thus, in addition, such as, to begin with, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8152173913 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36261612338 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1381787202 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19355371879 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606861660434 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564661264553 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141039029711 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497799200931 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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