The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from the suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, traffic congestion has become a grave problem. Therefore, it is suggested that the best method to control it is to persuade people to move in cities. I think this kind of implementation will bring more cons than pros. This essay will discuss the drawbacks of it and provide other viable ways to control this malaise.
To begin with, cities are already overcrowded . Then, it is not convenient to migrate rural dwellers to cities. As, it not only enhance the population but also , it gives birth to many threats such as inflation, crime and also Contaminate the environment. Overall, it will impair the quality of life and reduces life expectancy. Furthermore, it will bring unemployment in the cities which might directly impacts the growth of economy. To illustrate this, it is surveyed by the economists that metropolitan cities which are overpopulated are declining their growth by two times as compare to cities which have less population .
Moreover, there are plethora of ways through which problem of traffic can be control. Authority should offer jobs and amenities to the natives where they live in like suburbs and countryside. It will benefit in terms of earning, education and health. Then, they do not feel to move to cities on daily basis which also the curb the issue of traffic. In addition, Online jobs and e-commerce business can be promoted so that people don’t feel the need of commuting. This will save their time, money and especially environment. Besides this, cities dwellers should come forward like they can opt pubic vehicle rather than their own vehicle and also do car pooling.
In conclusion, although cities provide many facilities and opportunities to people but, this cannot be denied that this migrating is not practical and leads to other dangers to large extent . Hence, government and masses should rely on other ways to eradicate it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.714065356 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3567011656 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2105263158 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176618445357 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512618447598 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443865873079 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102176956651 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283991668453 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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