You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement??
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
Over time, governments of some countries have been financing the entertainment industry. Investing in music and theatre is considered as an extravagant way of spending by some people; l am in total support with these individuals who opine that more investment should be expended on educational and healthcare facilities.
First, the authorities should ensure they pay sufficient attention to providing standard healthcare amenities to their citizens. It is believed that an unhealthy mind and body would never think of having pleasure but craves for a healthy heart. Therefore, the well being of human beings should be placed above any other non-essential sector. The Nigeria government is an example, one of its political agenda is to combat terrorism and ensure a secured economy. Consequently, billions of Nigeria currency (naira) had been squandered on purchasing weapon and ammunition amidst bribery and corruption.
Secondly, the level of education in some countries is not commensurate with what is obtainable in other developed nations. Education should be free, available to all and sundry. Also, the best educational infrastructure should be put in place for its citizen. Many governments of the globe are not performing in this aspect. For example, it is salient that in Nigeria, public school’s teachers are not well remunerated and the school buildings are in a deplorable state. If the government could strive proactively in this sector, it would reduce the numbers of people travelling abroad to study.
It is true that entertainment sector such as music, theatrical production also contributes to the economy by generating revenue through tax paid by musicians and comedians, however, it is still not a total remedy to a weakened, uneduacted mind. Government venturing a huge sum of money in it would not bring the revenue that is synonymous to the expenses incurred. This industry is not an essential service to the populace.
To conclude the above speculations, the government of every developing nation should look towards investing in essential services such as healthcare and educational facilities because a sound mind (both healthily and educationally) is believed to profitable and comfortable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47965116279 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13849977553 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7844786278 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.882352941 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188887896325 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568282701631 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461308868665 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106343168742 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385142148769 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.