The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart describes the different people from different nations living in Australia and the table illustrates the areas i.e. cities or rural areas where these people are living in Australia.
First of all, the most number of people are living in Australia are Australians with 73% of the total population of Australia. Whereas fewer people migrate from the Netherlands with merely 1%. The UK is standing on 3rd most people living in Australia with 7% which is followed by the rest of other countries i.e. 14% (second’s most after Australians). In addition to that, the people coming from New Zealand and China are 3% and 2% of the total population of Australia.
On the contrary, the most numbers of people living in cities in Australia are from China with 99% and the fewest people living in cities are from New Zealand with 80%. The UK and the Netherlands are with 89% and 90% respectively. And, Australia itself 83% of people living in the cities. But if we talk about the population of the rural areas, most of the new Zealand’s people love to live and the least people are from china with 1 % only. People from the UK and the Netherlands are 11% and 10% likes to live in village or remote areas. Moreover, Australians with 17 % population living in rural areas is the second-highest.
In Conclusion, 27% of the Australian population are from outside the nation and most of the people in Australia despite any country loves to live in cities rather than the rural areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...% of the total population of Australia. Whereas fewer people migrate from the Netherlan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74418604651 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62981314161 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.422480620155 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0014775181 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279029645769 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129796050326 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757689323555 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210841096111 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615987775534 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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