The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates.
Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.
You should write at least 150 words.
Writing Task 1
The given flow chart depicts, the procedure to be followed by students who have completed their higher schooling the admission in an university.
Overall view, states that the students who completed there higher education in school can apply for the application form which needs certain certificates as well as approval by universities Admin, then later can choose subjects before entering the university.
Firstly, a high school students should pass their examinations and then complete the application form, which can be downloaded from the university's website. After filling it, they should send to Admin where it can undergo any of the three procedures that are: the provisional acceptance , complete acceptance or rejection. If the form is rejected then students can apply for alternative course or else it is cancelled then again should send to admin. In addition, if the form is been accepted but require more doctuments, the students should compile it and resend to admin. Moreover, if the application is accepted, they should enroll for particular subject, so on register with Dean then only they can enter the university.
To sum up, the students are required to consider the particular procedure of the university to enter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...their higher schooling the admission in an university. Overall view, states tha...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...res that are: the provisional acceptance , complete acceptance or rejection. If th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34183673469 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85638446405 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4690903887 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 5.23603664747 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133732312561 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067136218342 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276158445517 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840395264365 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275713954455 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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