Some people believe that the government spends too much on developing space exploration technology and there are many other financial needs that the government should address instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recent proliferations in the field of space exploration, has forced all the nations to participate in this race, thus, proving to be detrimental for the nation's growth. Rising concerns of the public are however, inclined more towards other sectors like education, public health and infrastructure development, rather than on space engineering. This essay will discuss why there is an urgent need to establish other important areas, than aerospace.
Increasing competition, overpopulation and various other factors, have forced the government to take certain remedial steps, in order to shape economy. Certainly, if the party in power , contributes towards the development of its citizens , it would provide many positive outcomes. The increase in more literate population, would however, lead to a rise in Gross Domestic Product of the country. The availability of basic health needs, helps an individual to become stress-free and risk averse.
The expansion of aeronautics sector, will in turn shift a huge chunk of nation's budget to it, thus leaving the whole economy in splits. The effectiveness in these operations, could therefore be achieved only with the help of skilled labour. The establishment of rockets and satellites require a majority of fund allocation, and if the project is left in between it can be cumbersome for both citizens and ruling party. The taxpayer's money must be effectively utilised. Huge set of protocols, must be followed in accordance to eliminate environmental pollution. If this is not done properly, it can disturb the natural resources.
Prudence is very essential, because the effects and drawbacks of choosing the wrong area for evolution, could be quite perilous for a province. So, these decisions must be taken with proper checklist of all the essential things to be done.
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- Some people believe that the government spends too much on developing space exploration technology and there are many other financial needs that the government should address instead To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- Some people believe that the government spends too much on developing space exploration technology and there are many other financial needs that the government should address instead To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- Some people believe that the government spends too much on developing space exploration technology and there are many other financial needs that the government should address instead To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...thus, proving to be detrimental for the nations growth. Rising concerns of the public a...
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Line 1, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...eed to establish other important areas, than aerospace. Increasing competition, o...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...conomy. Certainly, if the party in power , contributes towards the development of ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... towards the development of its citizens , it would provide many positive outcomes...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... become stress-free and risk averse. The expansion of aeronautics sector, will i...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...us leaving the whole economy in splits. The effectiveness in these operations, coul...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d only with the help of skilled labour. The establishment of rockets and satellites...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ome for both citizens and ruling party. The taxpayers money must be effectively uti...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'taxpayers'' or 'taxpayer's'?
Suggestion: taxpayers'; taxpayer's
...for both citizens and ruling party. The taxpayers money must be effectively utilised. Hug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41549295775 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06900602561 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640845070423 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1110046572 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0573371637965 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0172059583134 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265789445364 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0339515589726 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033994737802 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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